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For what it's worth at this late stage (!), I only ever read the author's preferred version and came out of it feeling it was about 15000 words too long and the meeting Jesus bit was boring, self-indulgent crap. So the original cuts were probably a good thing. (Also I had no trouble with Shadow's likeability.)

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